Sunday, October 26, 2008

WA#2: Final Draft

The growing silence that ensued was dreadful. The air was so tense, it seemed as though every movement made was a move in a chess game. Why did she move there? Was that supposed to mean something? And it had only been an hour. Three more hours confined within the walls of the gray-green steel car loomed ominously. The dad, Mark, was driving while the daughter, Lilly, was the passenger.

The clear skies outside the car pleased Mark. They pissed off Lilly. If it was at least raining, then she wouldn’t have felt like the most miserable person in the world at the time. Somebody else would be miserable because of the rain, and to her, that was an undeniable fact.

What was also a fact, at least by Lilly’s standards, was that teenage girls and their dads do not get a long. Never have, never will. So a four hour car trip with a hateful relationship crammed in one car amounted to the Silent War. In the Silent War, the emotions were so potent, their vibes penetrated further than any words could have, and therefore, no words were spoken. And when it came to Silent Wars, Mark put aside his fatherly character with all its intentions of setting a mature example for his daughter. He stooped to his daughter’s immature, teenage ways and followed her lead in the War.

This particular father and daughter in this particular gray-green steel car were engaged in a particularly silent war.

Mark turned the radio on. Lily considered this a victory as he was obviously unable to handle the Silence. “Ohhhh. What now,” she whispered into the passenger window. However, this victory wouldn’t suffice. So she changed the station from the droning NPR news to her main man, Lil Wayne. It took a mere two seconds before Mark changed it back. She sucked her teeth, making a loud squelching sound. She reached her hand out and changed it to Lil Wayne again. He reached out his hand, slapped hers, and changed it back. She slapped his hand and changed it again.

Slap. Change. Again. Slap. Change. Again.

As the slapping and button-pressing intensified, the Battle of the Hands officially came underway. Back and forth, more and more viciously, they silently slapped one another’s hand. As the Battle reached its peak, however, a horn sounded and the two suddenly jerked to a stop. Having been so caught up in the Battle, Mark had accidentally swerved into another lane. As he straightened the car out, with both hands on the wheel, the honking car sped past, and its driver made a rude hand gesture. It was with just one finger- the middle one, to be precise.

Simultaneously, as though contaminated by the enemy, they each wiped his or her hands on the smooth, leather seats of the gray-green steel car. There was a brief, incredibly awkward moment of eye contact, but the two briskly looked away.

To Lilly’s dismay, their battle had ended with the radio playing, “…. the polls continue to show Obama with a strong lead over McCain…” This meant that her dad had won, and the war was at a tie: one-to-one.

As the sky outside grew dark, and Lilly thought out her next battle strategy. The devil emerged from the shadows of her mind, and without a moment’s hesitance, she put her plan into action. She whipped up her book from the carpeted floor of the car, slyly reached up to the ceiling of the gray-green steel car, and switched the light on. As she opened her book with sudden extreme intent on finishing the thing, she could feel his piercing eyes penetrating the skin on her face. Before his anger could singe a hole in her face, he surprisingly resumed to concentrating on the road, leaving the light on.

Victorious! Lilly was leading two-to-one.

Suddenly, a horn sounded again. It wasn’t one of those, Get Out Of The Way, Damnit, horns. It was more of a, Watch Out! horn, and it was coming from behind. Mark looked frantically into the rearview mirror, but couldn’t see anything; the light was blocking his view.

Two seconds later, two terrified screams later and one crash later, Mark and Lilly sat in the gray-green steel car, which sat in a ditch. The two looked into one another’s frightened, shocked and tear-filled eyes. They each marveled at the still existing life sitting at one another’s side.

The two continued to sit in silence, but the tone that this silence held was different. This silence was not the silence of war. It was the silence that exists when love overpowers the need for words. The pretend hate evaporated and the true love was unearthed. Simultaneously, the two embraced.

Monday, October 20, 2008

WA#2: Revised Draft

The silence was quite aggravating. The air was so tense, it seemed as though every movement made was a move in a chess game. Watched intently. Why did she move there? Was that supposed to mean something? And it had only been an hour. Three more hours confined within the walls of the gray-green steel car loomed ominously. The dad, Mark, was driving while the daughter, Lilly, was the passenger.

The clear skies outside the car pleased Mark. They pissed off Lilly. If it was at least raining, then she wouldn’t have felt like the most miserable person in the world at the time. Somebody else would be miserable because of the rain, and to her, that was an undeniable fact.

What’s also a fact, at least by Lilly’s standards, is that teenage girls and their dads do not get a long. Never have, never will. So a four hour car trip with a hateful relationship crammed in one car amounts to the Silent War. In a Silent War, emotions are so potent, their vibes penetrate further than any words could, and therefore, no words are spoken. This particular father and daughter in this particular gray-green steel car were engaged in a particularly silent war.

Mark turned the radio on. Lily considered this a victory as he was obviously unable to handle the Silence. “Ohhhh. What now,” she whispered into the passenger window. However, this victory wouldn’t suffice. So she changed the station from the droning NPR news to her main man, Lil Wayne. It took a mere two seconds before Mark changed it back. She sucked her teeth, making a loud squelching sound. She reached her hand out and changed it to Lil Wayne again. He reached out his hand, slapped hers, and changed it back. She slapped his hand and changed it again.

As the slapping and button-pressing intensified, the Battle of the Hands came underway. It was just a portion of the Silent War. Back and forth, more and more viciously, they silently slapped one another’s hand. As the Battle reached its peak, however, a horn sounded and the two suddenly jerked to a stop. Being so caught up in the Battle, Mark had accidentally swerved into another lane. As he straightened the car out, with both hands on the wheel, the honking car sped past, and its driver made a rude hand gesture. It was with just one finger- the middle one, to be precise.

Simultaneously, as though contaminated by the enemy, they each wiped his or her hands on the smooth, leather seats of the gray-green steel car. There was a brief, awkward moment of eye contact, but the two briskly looked away.

To Lilly’s dismay, their battle had ended with the radio playing, “…. the polls continue to show Obama with a strong lead over McCain…” This meant that her dad had won, and the war was at a tie: one-to-one.

The sky outside grew dark, and Lilly evolved her next plan of evil in her head. The devil emerged from the shadows of her mind, and without a moment’s hesitance, she put her plan into action. She whipped up her book from the carpeted floor of the car, slyly reached up to the ceiling of the gray-green steel car, and switched the light on. As she opened her book with sudden extreme intent on finishing the thing, she could feel his piercing eyes penetrating the skin on her face. Before his anger could singe a hole in her face, he surprisingly resumed to concentrating on the road, leaving the light on.

Victorious! Lilly was leading two-to-one.

Suddenly, a horn sounded again. It wasn’t one of those, Get Out Of The Way, Damnit, horns. It was more of a, Watch Out! horn, and it was coming from behind. Mark looked frantically into the rearview mirror, but couldn’t see anything; the light was blocking his vision.

Two seconds later, two terrified screams later and one crash later, Mark and Lilly sat in the gray-green steel car, which sat in a ditch. The two looked into one another’s frightened, shocked and tear-filled eyes. They each marveled at the still existing life sitting at one another’s side.

As they gazed, the atmosphere changed. The Silent War remained silent, but the war was over. The pretend hate evaporated and the true love was unearthed. Simultaneously, the two embraced.

Sometimes the things that aren’t said can be so powerful.

Monday, October 13, 2008

WA#2: First Draft

The silence was quite aggravating. The air was so tense, it seemed as though every small movement made by either person was a move in a chess game. Watched intently. Why did she move there? Was that supposed to mean something? And it had only been an hour. Three more hours confined within the walls of the gray-green steel car loomed ominously. The dad was driving, the daughter was passengering.

The clear skies outside the car pleased the dad; the driver. They pissed off the daughter; the passenger. If it was at least raining, then she wouldn’t have to feel like the most miserable person in the world at the time. Somebody else would be miserable because of the rain, it’s a fact.

What is also a fact, at least by the daughter’s standards, is that teenage girls and their dads do not get a long. Never have, never will. So a four hour car trip with a hateful relationship crammed in one car amounts to the Silent War. This particular father and daughter in this particular gray-green steel car were engaged in a particularly Silent War.

The things that aren’t said are so powerful.

The dad turned the radio on. The daughter considered this a victory. “Ohhhh. What now.” she whispered to the passenger window. But somehow, it wasn’t enough. So she changed the station from NPR covering the election to her main man, Lil Wayne. Two seconds passed, and the dad changed it back. She sucked her teeth. A loud squelching sound. She reached her hand out and changed it to Lil Wayne again. He reached out his hand, slapped hers, and changed it back. She slapped his hand and changed it again.

Soon, The Battle of the Hands was underway. Just a portion of the Silent War. Back and forth, more and more viciously, they slapped one another’s hand. It was becoming nearly as intense as the Biden-Palin Vice Presidential debate. However, the two suddenly jerked to a stop at the sound of a horn. The dad had swerved into another lane by accident. He was caught up in the Battle. As he straightened the car out, with both hands on the wheel, the honking car sped past, and its driver gestured rudely with something smaller then his hand. Just one finger, the middle one, to be precise.

Simultaneously, as though contaminated by the enemy, they both wiped their hands on the smooth, leather seats of the gray-green steel car. They had a brief, awkward moment of eye contact, but briskly looked away.

The things that aren’t said are so powerful.

To the daughter’s dismay, their battle had ended with the radio playing, “…. the polls continue to show Obama with a strong lead over McCain…” The war was currently at a tie: one-to-one.

The sky outside grew dark, and daughter’s next plan of evil popped into her head. The devil popped out of the closet. Again. She whipped up her book from the carpeted floor of the car, slyly reached up to the ceiling of the grey-green steel car, and switched the light on. As she opened her book, as though she suddenly had extreme intent on finishing the thing, she could feel he father’s piercing eyes penetrating the skin on her face. Before he could burn a hole in her face and resumed to concentrating on the road. He left the light on.

Victorious! The daughter leads two-to-one.

Suddenly, a horn sounded again. It wasn’t one of those, Get Out Of The Way, Damnit, horns. It was more of a Watch Out! horn. It was coming from behind. The father looked frantically into the rearview mirror, but couldn’t see anything; the light was blocking his vision. Two seconds later, Two terrified screams later, One crash later, the father and the daughter sat in their gray-green steel car in a ditch. The two looked into one another’s frightened, shocked and tear-filled eyes. They each marveled at the still existing life sitting at each other’s side.

The air changed. The Silent War remained silent, but the war was over. The pretend hate evaporated and the true love was unearthed. Simultaneously, the two embraced.

The things that aren’t said are so powerful.